Wednesday, September 5, 2018

Characteristics of the Introductory Essay

First Hour Thinking
An effective introductory essay will......

intrigue the reader
show the voice of the author
have an anchor that connects to the author's life
illustrate thoughtful word choice and purposeful sentence structure
introduce aspects of your personality to the reader through the use of detail
be free of grammatical and spelling errors
consist of no more than 650 words
shift the ground upon which the reader stands


Third Hour Thinking
An effective introductory essay will…..
Demonstrate  proper grammar, usage and mechanics
Use a variety of sentence lengths
Express the author’s voice
Engage the readers
Use appropriate vocabulary and purposeful diction
Show and tell through the use of detail
Utilize a structure that is organic to its purpose
Introduce the author reaching beyond surface detail
Establish a connection between the reader and the author
Convey some type of emotion
Leave the audience wanting to know more or “forever changed”
Consist of 650 words
Illustrate creativity and individuality

Fourth Hour Thinking
An effective introductory essay will…..

Catch the reader’s attention
Entertain the reader
Show the author’s voice
Describe the author
Be organized with a structure that is creative and organic to the purpose and content
Evoke the emotion of the audience
Tell a unique story
Give insight into the author’s life
Be personal
Be free of grammatical and mechanical errors
Consist of 650 words
Not be a list

Be memorable and not easily forgotten

Sixth Hour Thinking

An effective introductory essay will…..

Be imaginative
Display your qualities
Show your creativity
Make the reader feel as though they know you
Be captivating
Reflect your voice
Break rules
Use proper grammar, usage and mechanics
Consist of 650 words
Leave the reader shook
Show your personality
Shows individuality

Have an anchor or context

Thursday, May 31, 2018

AP Lang exam prompt


Reflect upon your year in AP Lang.  Discuss your growth as a writer, reader, student, human. Show and tell by including specific anecdote(s) and/or examples to illustrate your assertions and ideas. Maybe include some sweet rhetorical moves to show off what you’ve learned this year.  800 words minimum.  Write the word count at the bottom of the page.  Share your essay to the folder indicated on the most recent post of my blog: mcallister470.blogspot.com.  If you write it ahead of time, you still have to show up for the exam and be silent until everyone is finished.


Put your college app essays in this folder

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1AMvT-hPj5CLFQc2-ZYGb8JQ0pvuWBEKd?usp=sharing

Tuesday, April 24, 2018

AP shirt ideas

Feel free to comment with ideas or to share more designs.....we can vote on a winner.  These  designs are courtesty of the talented Simon Scheer.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MVyZulGC2A7j1HmDQ85dKBOeCKpP873SxfvzGrZ6cvA/edit?usp=sharing

Tuesday, March 20, 2018

synthesis model

http://media.collegeboard.com/digitalServices/pdf/ap/apcentral/ap14_english_lang_q1.pdf

Wednesday, February 28, 2018

Jekyll and Hyde Story of the Door

In your own words:

Describe Mr.Utterson
Describe the relationship between Enfield and Utterson
Recount Enfield's story of the door.
Restate the description that Enfield gives of the "gentleman" who commits the crime.
What is unusual about the "cheque" that he presents?
How does Enfield feel about telling Utterson the story?


Friday, February 23, 2018

archetypes

http://teacherpress.ocps.net/wellsml/files/2012/05/Archetypes-and-Symbols.pdf