Thursday, January 20, 2022

Be Okay with Time and Space

 We are living in a time of increased stress and anxiety due to the challenges of the global pandemic.  There is much concern about student mental health. I am trying, in my classroom, to not contribute to this problem. My students are currently writing essays. I am asking my students to engage in an activity that requires deep reading, thinking and then thoughtful expression.  The chance that this happens at home for them after school is slim.  So many extra curriculars, so much math homework, so much exhaustion from the school day (to which many of them are STILL trying to adjust after the shut down) .....I need to be okay with my commitment to provide them the structured time and space to read and write and think.  Without me.  I have done all of the direct teaching to get them to this point.  I need to be okay with them not needing me right now. Or at least, not needing me constantly.  They know that I am here if they need help. I need to be okay not talking.  We teachers love to hear ourselves talk.  I need to be okay with the quiet.  I need to do as I have asked them to do: trust the writing process. It's so difficult. 

Wednesday, September 5, 2018

Characteristics of the Introductory Essay

First Hour Thinking
An effective introductory essay will......

intrigue the reader
show the voice of the author
have an anchor that connects to the author's life
illustrate thoughtful word choice and purposeful sentence structure
introduce aspects of your personality to the reader through the use of detail
be free of grammatical and spelling errors
consist of no more than 650 words
shift the ground upon which the reader stands


Third Hour Thinking
An effective introductory essay will…..
Demonstrate  proper grammar, usage and mechanics
Use a variety of sentence lengths
Express the author’s voice
Engage the readers
Use appropriate vocabulary and purposeful diction
Show and tell through the use of detail
Utilize a structure that is organic to its purpose
Introduce the author reaching beyond surface detail
Establish a connection between the reader and the author
Convey some type of emotion
Leave the audience wanting to know more or “forever changed”
Consist of 650 words
Illustrate creativity and individuality

Fourth Hour Thinking
An effective introductory essay will…..

Catch the reader’s attention
Entertain the reader
Show the author’s voice
Describe the author
Be organized with a structure that is creative and organic to the purpose and content
Evoke the emotion of the audience
Tell a unique story
Give insight into the author’s life
Be personal
Be free of grammatical and mechanical errors
Consist of 650 words
Not be a list

Be memorable and not easily forgotten

Sixth Hour Thinking

An effective introductory essay will…..

Be imaginative
Display your qualities
Show your creativity
Make the reader feel as though they know you
Be captivating
Reflect your voice
Break rules
Use proper grammar, usage and mechanics
Consist of 650 words
Leave the reader shook
Show your personality
Shows individuality

Have an anchor or context

Thursday, May 31, 2018

AP Lang exam prompt


Reflect upon your year in AP Lang.  Discuss your growth as a writer, reader, student, human. Show and tell by including specific anecdote(s) and/or examples to illustrate your assertions and ideas. Maybe include some sweet rhetorical moves to show off what you’ve learned this year.  800 words minimum.  Write the word count at the bottom of the page.  Share your essay to the folder indicated on the most recent post of my blog: mcallister470.blogspot.com.  If you write it ahead of time, you still have to show up for the exam and be silent until everyone is finished.